Type: Circuit
Name: Sightseeing Tour
Author: Szumixx.
Location: Los Santos or Countryside
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yb9NCeSDx0U&feature=youtu.be
My friend is very like this :)
Updated 06.04.2018
Great map!
However, the following things need corrections, imho:
0:14 - yeah, the orange barriers, seems floating
0:33 - on left side: the helix barriers, they got underground, literally
on right side: the fence, noticeable slight height difference
0:38 - obvious things, the helix barriers placement
0:49 - on right side: slight noticeable bad positioning of helix barrier
0:51 - the idea of blockade is good, but the object used decision is bad
0:52 - sorry but, horrible placement of the barriers. i think unnecessary tho
0:58 ~ 1:00 - ....better to remove all those placed barriers, fences, walls
1:12 - i think, the arrows on left aren't necessary
1:18 - those cars are too many, i think 2 cars are just enough. 1 police sedan and 1 police suv is my suggestions.
(05-04-2018, 22:29)Szumixx Wrote: [ -> ]ok wait for update
that's only from me,
the others may have different opinions.
So my suggestion is wait a bit more, maybe till tmorrow, then you can start making changes after.
Ok updated 06.04.2018 and updated video
Okay, for me - map is very good now
Great job mate