Sprint Is Legal go over here?

[BDragon]

Creator: DaX


Type: Sprint



Description: this is an fixed version from an previous posted map, called Around East Coast


Map Showcase:



https://youtu.be/uwAqVsUYiGI

(This post was last modified: 31-12-2020, 06:13 by BDragon.)

[scaftz]

0:06 - I like this overpass decoration, however its not pretty well made, see one of its pillar beams clip through buildings.
0:20 - This shortcut fences looks so cheap. That building also shouldn't be there, just stupid seeing it half buried by the grass hill.
0:28 - Kinda too many of those ugly lanterns, not needed at all.
0:33 - This arrow barrier decoration makes no sense.
0:50 - Would be really nice if you let open the roadsides, see Dock and Roll map for reference.
1:25 - Not cool floating guardrails.
1:31 - Quite as cheap looking as the shortcut at 0:20. And let's be real that route won't provide any timesafe at all. Just get rid of them.
1:35 - These lanterns again.

[kayra999]

I dont wanna be a nitpicker but lemme tell some things

0.19 dont you think there is a lot of trees there ?
0.20 building just doesnt fit there you can just extend arrows
0.27 you are doing the same mistake as I do dont spam same object too much lanterns I mean
0.34 is that a border pass inside of an arrow
1.25 I know curving a guardrail is hard but come on man
1.34 lanteeeeeeeeeeeeeeern

Overall - Pretty good route with good decoration but at some point you tried to put a lot of things to make map look filled.
I am gonna say what scaftz told me months ago
''Rule of thumb, if you are not sure what to put as decoration, don't decorate. Decorations are appreciated but not needed and bad decoration just ruin a possibly good map.''

Keep up with the things that scaftz said and you will make a good map in no time at all