Going to the damn train!

[StRiD]

Hello Guys, I'm StRiD. I make map. Where you go from the Las Venturas Airport to Las Venturas Platform. Sorry for bad English. Sorry for Action WaterMark. Here's video. Btw. You are not CJ and that's why the title is Going To the damn train. Not ...Damn Train CJ! Ohhhh, Sorry  

for that rendering bug in 0:35 to 0:40.

:::EDIT:::
I Forgot about time 1:30. Here you can Turn left, go straight or by shortcut.

 

(This post was last modified: 26-08-2017, 16:44 by StRiD. Edit Reason: Forgot about something :vvv )

[bamers]

i can say that
it is a cool track!

[Ksysio]

To be honest with you too many lights on bridge, too many cars on parking. If you change it it will be cool map.

[StRiD]

I must change some details like this one. I think about lights reduction to 3 on bridge.

(This post was last modified: 26-08-2017, 23:13 by StRiD.)

[MechaNoxia]

Not bad but.. imo, there is way too much cars, you could change at least 33% of them easily by arrows, but still a nice track

[Helomyname]

Agreed, too many cars on the map, and a couple more fixes i'd like to see:

1) 0:18 - Arrows finish on the sidewalk instead of the wall. Doing this map in reverse it would be easy to crash into them.
2) 0:30 - Arrows finish on the sidewalk again, followed by no fence of any kind. Once again it could be confusing in reverse. Maybe add additional barriers there so players know how to cut/not cut the corner.
3) 0:49 - Arrows finish on the sidewalk
4) 1:24 - This corner needs to be marked more clearly, just cars and open space in the gas station makes it difficult to tell where you're supposed to go.
5) 1:29 - Remove alternative route going left, leave only straight + shortcut.

And obviously tone down the cars throughout the map as they cause lag. With this fixes I would be happy to see the map on the server.

[StRiD]

Agreed, too many cars on the map, and a couple more fixes i'd like to see:

1) 0:18 - Arrows finish on the sidewalk instead of the wall. Doing this map in reverse it would be easy to crash into them.
2) 0:30 - Arrows finish on the sidewalk again, followed by no fence of any kind. Once again it could be confusing in reverse. Maybe add additional barriers there so players know how to cut/not cut the corner.
3) 0:49 - Arrows finish on the sidewalk
4) 1:24 - This corner needs to be marked more clearly, just cars and open space in the gas station makes it difficult to tell where you're supposed to go.
5) 1:29 - Remove alternative route going left, leave only straight + shortcut.

And obviously tone down the cars throughout the map as they cause lag. With this fixes I would be happy to see the map on the server.

I take it. I edited some turn's for better look. Wait for HD youtube converting :vvv
Video: 

[Helomyname]

Much better, you can send me the map