Devilish

The map looks good and the decoration looks good too but the Alley wasnt.I agree with Ivke that you should remove the Alley at 0:59 and 0:35 because its unacceptable,I cant imagine how muscle car turn at that alley,thats all for me.

(28-09-2022, 04:52)benjabrown2005 Wrote: Name: Portland <number depending on the amount of maps>
Map location: LS South (basically on the water)
Map type: Drift and maybe streetX?
Author: RacerNub

Map showcase: https://youtu.be/YZr-EolXfYg


If you are a true NFS fan then you must know the classic maps drifting in the port between containers, so i tried to do something similar to that

The video that is above is just an example of a map, there could be many more of them in that place (just like in the StreetX & drift maps that already exist)

Tell me if i should change or add something

idk about change or add thing....but the map is narrow and too much turn and maybe its seems like you must fix those arrow wall and remove some of it and remove those container i mean in the below

0:46 - you should connect them to the side of the container

 


0:48 - remove those arrow wall and that container i mean in the below because you already block that area




well i cant tell to you about whats wrong in the map and maybe i cant help you that much yeah

No need to give more space or anything,just fix the arrow thing and put some "roadbarrier"/arrow wall in big gap
0:51 - you should make the arrow like this 

and like this : 


1:07 - you leave the big gap in the left and the right
1:48 - try to cover these gap with "roadbarrier"
2:03 - remove the arrow wall and change the "roadbarrier" like this :



3:45 - you left the big gap in here,try to add "roadbarrier" yeah
5:37 - cover the right side and left side with "roadbarrier"
5:45 - same with 5:37 but just cover it with "roadbarrier" in the right side like this :



and then like this :


connect them to the finish 

thats all,i hope you clearly understand it and its helpful for you

(05-05-2022, 16:20)Tekk Wrote: That's a lot of sub_roadbarrier props. Can't say it's a bad thing unless these were placed badly, will see.

I'd suggest to close the huge gap on the right side @ 1:13, because that could confuse some players on the reverse route.

Also 1:36, that arrow wall on the right looks a bit bad to me. Pretty sure you can change the entire curve there to make it to look more appropriate. No real need to connect it to the sub_roadbarrier as it's done right now, IMO.

at 1:13, i fixed it the huge gaps with arrow wall and also i change a little bit about the arrow wall at left side so the road is not that narrow



at 1:36 i have 2 option

option 1 : 




option 2 : 


so you can choose which one is better

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Author: Devilish
Type: Circuit
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