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Dude, I understand that you want me to completely change my application?

No, just write a better explanation why you want to do this job. You should explain in a proper way, why you would be the best choice for the russian moderator, but without comparing yourself with the other applicants. You need to convince bartek. But it's not only the application, it's also your activities on the server. Practice your english skills a bit (its not bad at the moment, but could be better), be more active in chat, help some users, and keep that attitude and activity, then you would convince bartek, in my opinion atleast. I don't know how bartek thinks about you.

Well, thank you, I'll try to take into account all the shortcomings